Dear Miss Lily,
I am sorry you have lost so many important people in your life and that you had a poor, boring life after they died. I agree with you, and that a person should live a shorter, happier life than a long life that is filled with sadness. After all, what fun is it to live if you don’t have any friends or family to share the fun memories with? I really enjoyed following your relationship with Snow Flower throughout the entire novel. I liked seeing how you were both young and innocent as children, grew to love each other, shared hardships, and then returned to having a good relationship again. It was nice to see your relationship come full circle, even if you felt unsatisfied with the way you treated Snow Flower at the end of her life. How did you feel when Snow Flower told you, “Why should I trouble you with things you cannot change?” ? Did you think she was nice for not telling you her hardships and making you worry about them too, or were you angry at her for hiding her feelings and keeping the pain held inside of her? How did you feel when you realized Lotus had brought the secret fan to you house? I strongly disagree with the manner in which you attempted to release your angers. It is extremely unhealthy for anyone to keep their angers held inside of them. I realize that women in nineteenth century China needed to be strong and obedient to their husbands, but if I were in your situation, I would have talked to someone or written down my problems instead of trying to cover them up with ink because it just temporarily fixes the problem. How could you have been so cruel to Snow Flower and used the secrets she shared with you in such confidence, against her? Well I am truly sorry for the losses you endured in your life and I hope the rest of this life and your next life will be filled with happy memories.
Sincerely,
Rachel
Tuesday, May 27, 2008
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 7, Post A
“I folded the fan and put it away. Snow Flower had asked me to write back. I didn’t” (221). In this novel, Lily and her laotong, Snow Flower, communicate with each other by writing on a fan. In America, people communicate by writing letters, and now-a-days they write emails. The traditional writing on the fan in China is a great contrast to the ways of writing in America. This type of writing also was a bond between the two women and had a huge impact on their lives, because it was a way of recording their history together. But in America, we write letters or emails to other people to communicate what’s happening at the present or future time.
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 6, Post B
Dear Ms. Lily,
Your life has changed dramatically, yet again! I cannot believe all of the hardships you have gone through recently! The pain you suffered watching Snow Flower lose 5 children, and being separated from your family for over three months must have been unbearable, and I am sorry you had to endure this. The division between your life and Snow Flower’s life has become more apparent, especially after you became Lady Lu. Were you scared once you were named Lady Lu? Did you feel you had to live up to a certain reputation? Did you think other people would immediately recognize you and listen to your orders? Anyways, your relationship with Snow Flower seemed to be falling apart, yet you stayed with her and comforted her in her darkest days. You are a true friend. How did you feel when your husband left to find salt in Guilin? What do you think the affects would have been on your children and your relationship with your in laws if he had not returned? Anyways, it seemed like you had a strong sense of pride in your village, “The first case of typhoid struck in the best village in the county- my Tongkou,” (177) was this because you were the new Lady Lu? You have definitely changed throughout this novel, and I am surprised at some of your actions. For instance, “When Jade protested that there were no scallions, no slivers of pork, not even any preserved vegetables, I slapped her hard across the face” (178). How were you able to harm your daughter when you had been slapped as a child and heard of the pain that beatings caused Snow Flower? The winter in the mountains must have been terrible! I am still curious as to how you were able to survive three months on so little food and shelter. It must have been extremely difficult to be a mother and wife, away from your children for that long, wondering every day if they were alive. I am so happy your husband found you at Snow Flower’s house and I hope you have good luck in the future!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 6, Post A
“A son was a woman’s life. It was her job and her fulfillment to meet his every demand” (162). In nineteenth century China, women were only considered useful for producing children, and only the male children would become successful in life. A woman had to meet every single need and desire of her husband, as well as that of her son! This is an extreme contrast to American society, where the women are considered just as useful as men and do not need to make sure every demand of their sons, or children, is fulfilled. Most women in America want to create the best life possible for their children and strive to fulfill their children’s needs, but it is not necessary for the women to complete everything their children wants of them.
Saturday, May 10, 2008
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 5, Post B
Dear Ms. Lily,
Congratulations on the birth of your son! He sounds like a wonderful baby, and you seem so happy now that he is here. I find it interesting that though you take so much pride in him, you never say his name. What is his name? Are there any naming rituals you practice, like naming the first son after the father? How did you feel when your mother accused you of causing Beautiful Moon’s death by bringing her outside? I cannot believe that you remained so calm when you and your mother had that fight! I found a striking cultural difference between traditional Chinese and American culture, “As in most marriages, the most important person for me to build a relationship with was my mother-in-law” (140). Why is this? Here, the most important relationship is between the husband and wife. It’s good to have a relationship with one’s in-laws, but its more important to have a strong bond with one’s husband. There was also a great difference in the hopeful birth of a child. In America, parents are usually thrilled with whatever sex their child is. But in China, you and all mothers hoped so badly to have a son! I thought it was interesting how you stole shoes from the altar for your baby and then you bring back the shoes once your baby is born. I feel absolutely terrible that you and Snow Flower are no longer able to see each other. With all of the tribulations you two have had, moving into new homes and such, your friendship was one of the last remains of hope either of you had. I also found it really interesting when Snow Flower says, “‘I thought we would soar together- two phoenixes in flight forever. Now I am like a dead thing sinking to the bottom of a pond. You say we will be together just the same. I believe you. But my threshold will hardly compare to yours” (131). She realizes just how much harm she caused to you for lying about her family wealth and wants to mend your relationship if possible. I hope you two will be able to see each other soon!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Congratulations on the birth of your son! He sounds like a wonderful baby, and you seem so happy now that he is here. I find it interesting that though you take so much pride in him, you never say his name. What is his name? Are there any naming rituals you practice, like naming the first son after the father? How did you feel when your mother accused you of causing Beautiful Moon’s death by bringing her outside? I cannot believe that you remained so calm when you and your mother had that fight! I found a striking cultural difference between traditional Chinese and American culture, “As in most marriages, the most important person for me to build a relationship with was my mother-in-law” (140). Why is this? Here, the most important relationship is between the husband and wife. It’s good to have a relationship with one’s in-laws, but its more important to have a strong bond with one’s husband. There was also a great difference in the hopeful birth of a child. In America, parents are usually thrilled with whatever sex their child is. But in China, you and all mothers hoped so badly to have a son! I thought it was interesting how you stole shoes from the altar for your baby and then you bring back the shoes once your baby is born. I feel absolutely terrible that you and Snow Flower are no longer able to see each other. With all of the tribulations you two have had, moving into new homes and such, your friendship was one of the last remains of hope either of you had. I also found it really interesting when Snow Flower says, “‘I thought we would soar together- two phoenixes in flight forever. Now I am like a dead thing sinking to the bottom of a pond. You say we will be together just the same. I believe you. But my threshold will hardly compare to yours” (131). She realizes just how much harm she caused to you for lying about her family wealth and wants to mend your relationship if possible. I hope you two will be able to see each other soon!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 5, Post A
“Only she can guarantee the perpetuation of the family line, which, in turn, is the ultimate duty of every son. This is the supreme way he completes his filial duty, while sons are a woman’s crowning glory. I had done all this and I was ecstatic (151). A stark difference between traditional Chinese and American culture is the importance placed on having a son in the family. Mothers, like Lily, hope and pray to have sons so they can become higher members of society, because giving birth to a son gave the mothers a sense of belonging in their husband’s family. Once Lily gave birth to her son, her husband’s family became much nicer to her. Her mother-in-law brought her soups, and her father-in-law gave her expensive cloth so she could make a coat for her son. Even Lily’s husband began to talk to her more.
Tuesday, May 6, 2008
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 4, Post A
“Yongang, the servant girl, led me through Tongkou’s alleyways. She carried my clothes, embroidery thread, cloth, and the third-day wedding book I had prepared for Snow Flower in a basket” (117). Yongang is Lily’s servant that she received through her marriage. First, any type of servant is really rare in American society, sure there are the occasional busts of people with “slaves” but for the most part it’s not a part of our culture. Secondly, American marriages don’t require the bride or the groom to exchange gifts or give things to each others’ families, which makes Yongang even more of a peculiarity.
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 4, Post B
Dear Miss Lily,
Was it really strange to have a servant, Yongang, following you around after you were married? How did her presence make you feel? Did you feel like you were of a completely different social class or did you think of her more as an acquaintance? At first it would be nice to have someone following me around, but after awhile I would get annoyed at that person because they would be with me all of the time and I like to do things on my own once in awhile too. I find it fascinating that when you arrived at Snow Flower’s house, you didn’t even have to knock to announce your arrival, you simply walked in. This is a strange idea to me because here in my city, the doors of houses are always locked and we have to ring a doorbell, or there are houses that have security systems that attempt to ward off intruders. This unique custom symbolizes that there is a more trusting and welcoming air about China, especially the city of Tongkou. How did you feel once you realized Snow Flower had lied to you about her house? Do you think Snow Flower was ashamed of telling you about her imperfect life and chose to make up lies about it instead? If this ever happened to me, I would at first be absolutely enraged at the person for lying to me, because I would rather hear the bad truth than the good lie. However, if I were to have a close relationship with the person, like you and Snow Flower do, I would begin to feel sorry for them for having to feel like they needed to live up to certain standards to please me. I don’t care how people live, or how rich they are, I just want to know that I have a friend who accepts themselves and me.
Sincerely, Rachel
Was it really strange to have a servant, Yongang, following you around after you were married? How did her presence make you feel? Did you feel like you were of a completely different social class or did you think of her more as an acquaintance? At first it would be nice to have someone following me around, but after awhile I would get annoyed at that person because they would be with me all of the time and I like to do things on my own once in awhile too. I find it fascinating that when you arrived at Snow Flower’s house, you didn’t even have to knock to announce your arrival, you simply walked in. This is a strange idea to me because here in my city, the doors of houses are always locked and we have to ring a doorbell, or there are houses that have security systems that attempt to ward off intruders. This unique custom symbolizes that there is a more trusting and welcoming air about China, especially the city of Tongkou. How did you feel once you realized Snow Flower had lied to you about her house? Do you think Snow Flower was ashamed of telling you about her imperfect life and chose to make up lies about it instead? If this ever happened to me, I would at first be absolutely enraged at the person for lying to me, because I would rather hear the bad truth than the good lie. However, if I were to have a close relationship with the person, like you and Snow Flower do, I would begin to feel sorry for them for having to feel like they needed to live up to certain standards to please me. I don’t care how people live, or how rich they are, I just want to know that I have a friend who accepts themselves and me.
Sincerely, Rachel
Tuesday, April 29, 2008
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 3, Post B
Dear Miss Lily,
I am so sorry to hear about the loss of your cousin, Beautiful Moon. Her death was so sudden and shocking that it is difficult for anyone to grasp what happened in just a few short minutes. I hope you have some comfort in knowing that she passed quietly and quickly. Not only am I surprised at how you handled yourself at her death, but I am absolutely shocked how your aunt was able to remain composed and never shed a tear during in front of you during your mourning. Snow Flower’s willingness to help during this time of loss seemed so helpful and reassuring to you and your family. On a lighter note, I am curious as to what you define the Yao nationality as, because I have learned a lot about different cultures and religions this year in my history class. I also found your quote “There is no life without death,” (99) really interesting because it is such a perplexing statement. I like it because it conveys the idea that no one will live forever, which makes our time alive that much more special. I also would like to congratulate you on your recent wedding! I can’t believe that you were able to go ten days without eating a substantial amount of food, I barely went seven hours without eating today and I was really hungry already! Your husband and new family seem so welcoming, I hope you share many wonderful memories together.
Sincerely,
Rachel
I am so sorry to hear about the loss of your cousin, Beautiful Moon. Her death was so sudden and shocking that it is difficult for anyone to grasp what happened in just a few short minutes. I hope you have some comfort in knowing that she passed quietly and quickly. Not only am I surprised at how you handled yourself at her death, but I am absolutely shocked how your aunt was able to remain composed and never shed a tear during in front of you during your mourning. Snow Flower’s willingness to help during this time of loss seemed so helpful and reassuring to you and your family. On a lighter note, I am curious as to what you define the Yao nationality as, because I have learned a lot about different cultures and religions this year in my history class. I also found your quote “There is no life without death,” (99) really interesting because it is such a perplexing statement. I like it because it conveys the idea that no one will live forever, which makes our time alive that much more special. I also would like to congratulate you on your recent wedding! I can’t believe that you were able to go ten days without eating a substantial amount of food, I barely went seven hours without eating today and I was really hungry already! Your husband and new family seem so welcoming, I hope you share many wonderful memories together.
Sincerely,
Rachel
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 3, Post A
“We may be worthless. We may be raised for another family. But often we are loved and cherished, despite our natal families’ best efforts not to have feelings for us” (96). In Chinese society, the women are thought of as useless, because they are burdens to their birth family and later, their husband’s family. This contrasts greatly to American society, where male and females are thought of equally. It is difficult to imagine how girls must have felt in China, because the only value they have to society is bearing male children. In addition, it would be disheartening to find out that you were to be shifted from one family to another and that their feelings for you would only come out on rare occasions.
Tuesday, April 22, 2008
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 2, Post B
Dear Miss Lily,
I just recently started reading a novel about your life growing up in China and I love it! At first, I didn’t think your relationship with Snow Flower was that strong, it seemed like you idolized her much more than she liked you. You always seemed to follow in her footsteps and waited for her to make the first judgment, “Thankfully Snow Flower took charge again” (52). Were you intimidated by Snow Flower? Were you ever jealous of her education? It seemed to me that Snow Flower always took control of you and guided you to believe and want the same things you did, which really bothered me because she seemed like such a control freak! Did you ever feel you were being completely overpowered by her? Were you bothered that you always had to be the first one to give an act of hospitality, after all you always had to initiate sending gifts and letters, and even welcoming her into your own house? This quote that you said really intrigued me, “...It didn’t disturb me, because I knew I didn’t deserve Snow Flower’s affections” (66). This is really hard for me to imagine someone saying this, because here in America it doesn’t really matter the class difference between you and your friend. But more importantly, I feel that in any kind of relationship, both people have to give the same amount of effort into it! It’s not fair if you feel you aren’t worthy of Snow Flower’s love, if it’s a true relationship you would both give each other the same amount of love. As the chapters went on, I came to enjoy both you and Snow Flower a lot, even though I found your relationship hard to understand at first.
Sincerely,
Rachel
I just recently started reading a novel about your life growing up in China and I love it! At first, I didn’t think your relationship with Snow Flower was that strong, it seemed like you idolized her much more than she liked you. You always seemed to follow in her footsteps and waited for her to make the first judgment, “Thankfully Snow Flower took charge again” (52). Were you intimidated by Snow Flower? Were you ever jealous of her education? It seemed to me that Snow Flower always took control of you and guided you to believe and want the same things you did, which really bothered me because she seemed like such a control freak! Did you ever feel you were being completely overpowered by her? Were you bothered that you always had to be the first one to give an act of hospitality, after all you always had to initiate sending gifts and letters, and even welcoming her into your own house? This quote that you said really intrigued me, “...It didn’t disturb me, because I knew I didn’t deserve Snow Flower’s affections” (66). This is really hard for me to imagine someone saying this, because here in America it doesn’t really matter the class difference between you and your friend. But more importantly, I feel that in any kind of relationship, both people have to give the same amount of effort into it! It’s not fair if you feel you aren’t worthy of Snow Flower’s love, if it’s a true relationship you would both give each other the same amount of love. As the chapters went on, I came to enjoy both you and Snow Flower a lot, even though I found your relationship hard to understand at first.
Sincerely,
Rachel
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 2, Post A
“My talking always gets me in trouble because I often don’t think before I speak, while you will be an ideal wife, always choosing your words with great care” (49). This line was spoken by Snow Flower, Lily’s “laotong”, to Lily. A “laotong” means “same-old” and the two girls basically had an arranged friendship that is extremely strong. Snow Flower is aware of her excessive talking and how that will probably lead her into problems in the future, especially with men. It is obvious through Snow Flower’s speech that in Chinese society, a man values a wife who is quiet and subordinate to him. This is really interesting because in American society, it isn’t absolutely necessary for a woman to marry a man and if there is a marriage, the roles of men and women in a family are fairly equal.
Sunday, April 20, 2008
World Issue- Pollution in China
For my world issue, I chose to research pollution in China.
Here are some links to articles:
"Beijing's Olympic Quest: Turn Smoggy Sky Blue" from The New York Times, on SIRS
http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/hst-article-display?id=SMN0307H-0-1924&artno=0000271241&type=ART&shfilter=U&key=&title=Beijing%27s%20Olympic%20Quest%3A%20Turn%20Smoggy%20Sky%20Blue&res=Y&ren=Y&gov=Y&lnk=N&ic=Y
"In China's Toxic Air, Winds of Change" from The Chicago Tribune, on SIRS
http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/hst-article-display?id=SMN0307H-0-1924&artno=0000259443&type=ART&shfilter=U&key=&title=In%20China%27s%20Toxic%20Air%2C%20Winds%20of%20Change&res=Y&ren=Y&gov=Y&lnk=N&ic=Y
"China's Pollution Cuts Local Rain" from BBC News Online
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/6441503.stm
Here are some links to articles:
"Beijing's Olympic Quest: Turn Smoggy Sky Blue" from The New York Times, on SIRS
http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/hst-article-display?id=SMN0307H-0-1924&artno=0000271241&type=ART&shfilter=U&key=&title=Beijing%27s%20Olympic%20Quest%3A%20Turn%20Smoggy%20Sky%20Blue&res=Y&ren=Y&gov=Y&lnk=N&ic=Y
"In China's Toxic Air, Winds of Change" from The Chicago Tribune, on SIRS
http://sks.sirs.com/cgi-bin/hst-article-display?id=SMN0307H-0-1924&artno=0000259443&type=ART&shfilter=U&key=&title=In%20China%27s%20Toxic%20Air%2C%20Winds%20of%20Change&res=Y&ren=Y&gov=Y&lnk=N&ic=Y
"China's Pollution Cuts Local Rain" from BBC News Online
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/science/nature/6441503.stm
Monday, April 14, 2008
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 1, Post B
Dear Ms. Lisa See,
I just started reading your novel, “Snow Flower and the Secret Fan” and it is absolutely enthralling! I literally cannot put it down, and it was really hard to force myself to stop so I could blog about it. Your writing style really captivates me, I love the details you put into each character yet there are not so many as to clutter the characters identities. I am curious as to why you don’t use the first names of the family members? Is it part of the Chinese culture to call your siblings by birth order? I am also wondering if you chose the names of the characters, like Lily and Snow Flower, because you enjoy flowers or if that too is also part of the Chinese culture? One of the smaller details I noticed was the way you dated Lily’s birth date, “the fifth day of the six month of the third year of Emperor Daoguang’s reign” (9). It reminded me of a novel I’m reading in school, “In the Time of the Butterflies” by Julia Alvarez, because she too dated events in the year of the dictator Trujillo’s rule in the Dominican Republic. Anyways, you can really pull the reader’s heart strings and I think that is an excellent trait for an author to have. I felt absolutely horrible for Lily when her feet were bound, even though she was rather old at just seven years of age. When you described the situation through Lily’s eyes it made it even worse, “The freshly created space where once there had been a joint was now a gelatinous infinity of torture” (30). That quote made me realize just how horrifying that experience must have been for Lily, and millions of other young girls. Why did you decide to write a novel about a young Chinese girl? Did you apply characteristics of yourself into Lily? I cannot wait to read more of the novel and find out what happens to her and her family, hopefully their future is filled with happy events!
Sincerely, Rachel
I just started reading your novel, “Snow Flower and the Secret Fan” and it is absolutely enthralling! I literally cannot put it down, and it was really hard to force myself to stop so I could blog about it. Your writing style really captivates me, I love the details you put into each character yet there are not so many as to clutter the characters identities. I am curious as to why you don’t use the first names of the family members? Is it part of the Chinese culture to call your siblings by birth order? I am also wondering if you chose the names of the characters, like Lily and Snow Flower, because you enjoy flowers or if that too is also part of the Chinese culture? One of the smaller details I noticed was the way you dated Lily’s birth date, “the fifth day of the six month of the third year of Emperor Daoguang’s reign” (9). It reminded me of a novel I’m reading in school, “In the Time of the Butterflies” by Julia Alvarez, because she too dated events in the year of the dictator Trujillo’s rule in the Dominican Republic. Anyways, you can really pull the reader’s heart strings and I think that is an excellent trait for an author to have. I felt absolutely horrible for Lily when her feet were bound, even though she was rather old at just seven years of age. When you described the situation through Lily’s eyes it made it even worse, “The freshly created space where once there had been a joint was now a gelatinous infinity of torture” (30). That quote made me realize just how horrifying that experience must have been for Lily, and millions of other young girls. Why did you decide to write a novel about a young Chinese girl? Did you apply characteristics of yourself into Lily? I cannot wait to read more of the novel and find out what happens to her and her family, hopefully their future is filled with happy events!
Sincerely, Rachel
Snow Flower and the Secret Fan, Week 1, Post A
“The word pain does not begin to describe the feeling. My toes were locked under my feet so that my body weight fell entirely on the top of those appendages. I tried to balance backwards on my heels. When Mama saw this, she hit me” (28). This quote is Lily’s thoughts just after her mother has bound her feet for the first time. Middle and upper class women in China routinely have their feet bound as young girls and the smaller their feet are bound the more attractive and expensive they are for men. The lower class women do not have their feet bound because they need to be mobile and work in fields, while the middle and upper class women use foot binding as a sign of wealth and high social status. I cannot even begin to imagine the pain Lily endured as her feet were compressed, smaller and smaller! When she described the day that each of her toes broke as she walked, I was absolutely horrified and felt terrible for her too. I am really glad that foot binding isn’t necessary in our culture, because I love being able to walk around and play sports.
Tuesday, April 8, 2008
Outside Reading Choice: Snow Flower and the Secret Fan
I chose to read the novel Snow Flower and the Secret Fan by Lisa See for outside reading this quarter. My friend absolutely loved the book and recommended it to me, because she read it for third outside reading, so when I saw it on the list I decided it was the right choice. This was the main reason I chose the novel, but it also intrigued me because we have learned so much about Chinese history and culture in AP World History this year. In addition, the Asian culture is really interesting to me because last summer I went on a trip to Japan for two weeks. I am really excited to read this novel because of the recommendation I have received for it and the connections I may have with it.
Sunday, March 23, 2008
Water for Elephants, Week 7, Post B
Dear Mr. Jacob Jankowski,
I just finished reading the novel and I really dislike the ending. It seemed so incomplete to me and left me hanging. It’s cool that you joined another circus at ninety-three years old, but I want to find out what happens at that circus (though I’m doubtful it would be as dramatic as the Benzini Brothers Circus, could anything get more action packed then that?!). Also, why did you decide not to kill August? You were just inches away from seeking your revenge against him, yet you decided not to. It was the perfect time to get back at him for the pain he caused you and Marlena and I feel it would have added more excitement and drama to the novel! I must say, Rosie is an incredible animal. I never realized how smart she could be by killing August with the stake, even though it is morbid thing to do. But why did you not want her to kill him? Did you want to be the one to kill him, or did you want to shelter Marlena from watching death? And the way she protects you and Marlena during the stampede is absolutely amazing! What were you thinking when you told the men that Rosie was your elephant? Were you afraid of them catching you for lying or were your just thinking about her safety? If I was in that situation, I probably would have acted on impulse and claimed her as my own, because the bond you two share was so strong. I am also wondering if you enjoyed the last circus you joined, because you seemed absolutely thrilled when Charlie asked you to go along? I hope the rest of your life is filled with as much excitement as the start of your life!
Sincerely,
Rachel
I just finished reading the novel and I really dislike the ending. It seemed so incomplete to me and left me hanging. It’s cool that you joined another circus at ninety-three years old, but I want to find out what happens at that circus (though I’m doubtful it would be as dramatic as the Benzini Brothers Circus, could anything get more action packed then that?!). Also, why did you decide not to kill August? You were just inches away from seeking your revenge against him, yet you decided not to. It was the perfect time to get back at him for the pain he caused you and Marlena and I feel it would have added more excitement and drama to the novel! I must say, Rosie is an incredible animal. I never realized how smart she could be by killing August with the stake, even though it is morbid thing to do. But why did you not want her to kill him? Did you want to be the one to kill him, or did you want to shelter Marlena from watching death? And the way she protects you and Marlena during the stampede is absolutely amazing! What were you thinking when you told the men that Rosie was your elephant? Were you afraid of them catching you for lying or were your just thinking about her safety? If I was in that situation, I probably would have acted on impulse and claimed her as my own, because the bond you two share was so strong. I am also wondering if you enjoyed the last circus you joined, because you seemed absolutely thrilled when Charlie asked you to go along? I hope the rest of your life is filled with as much excitement as the start of your life!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Water for Elephants, Week 7, Post A
VOCAB
Panoply (291)- an impressive display
Trestle (295)- the framework supporting a bridge
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“...my arms moving jerkily to the side, like the tightrope walker’s” (295). This is an example of a simile, because it compares the movement of Jacob’s unsteady arms to the wavering arms of a tightrope walker’s, using the word “like”.
“The curtains on the window are tied back, and moonlight flashes through the trees, alternately illuminating and hiding his face” (296). This is imagery because it is clear to the reader exactly how the light shines and flashes on August’s face. It is also symbolism because the light “alternately illuminating and hiding his face” is like August showing his two personalities, the kind one towards Marlena, and the harsh one towards Jacob.
“She lifts the stake as though it weighs nothing and splits his head in a single clean movement-ponk-like cracking a hardboiled egg” (309). This is an example of an onomatopoeia because of the word “ponk” which describes the sound as the stake hit August’s head.
QUOTE
“Hell, if you hadn’t been knocked flat and if we didn’t still have Camel here, I’d have never gotten back on this train tonight” (293). This quote was said by Walter, who used to be one of Jacob’s opponents. It is significant because it explains the strong bond Walter and Jacob now share, because Walter is willing to sacrifice the safety of his life to know that Jacob and Camel remain safe.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to be active throughout your life. When Jacob is in his nineties, he is still full of adventure and mischief as he sneaks out of the nursing home to attend the circus.
Panoply (291)- an impressive display
Trestle (295)- the framework supporting a bridge
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“...my arms moving jerkily to the side, like the tightrope walker’s” (295). This is an example of a simile, because it compares the movement of Jacob’s unsteady arms to the wavering arms of a tightrope walker’s, using the word “like”.
“The curtains on the window are tied back, and moonlight flashes through the trees, alternately illuminating and hiding his face” (296). This is imagery because it is clear to the reader exactly how the light shines and flashes on August’s face. It is also symbolism because the light “alternately illuminating and hiding his face” is like August showing his two personalities, the kind one towards Marlena, and the harsh one towards Jacob.
“She lifts the stake as though it weighs nothing and splits his head in a single clean movement-ponk-like cracking a hardboiled egg” (309). This is an example of an onomatopoeia because of the word “ponk” which describes the sound as the stake hit August’s head.
QUOTE
“Hell, if you hadn’t been knocked flat and if we didn’t still have Camel here, I’d have never gotten back on this train tonight” (293). This quote was said by Walter, who used to be one of Jacob’s opponents. It is significant because it explains the strong bond Walter and Jacob now share, because Walter is willing to sacrifice the safety of his life to know that Jacob and Camel remain safe.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to be active throughout your life. When Jacob is in his nineties, he is still full of adventure and mischief as he sneaks out of the nursing home to attend the circus.
Monday, March 17, 2008
Water for Elephants, Week 6, Post B
Dear Mr. Jacob Jankowski,
Wow, I have read another amazing section of the novel! (I had to force myself to put it down so I could save something to read for next week’s blog.) Once again, your life is filled with many trying times. Yet through your later years, Rosemary is a constant friend and supportive for you. This is an important figure to have in anyone’s life and just goes to show everyone the different ways a person can lend a hand when you need a boost up. She seems like such a sweet lady and reminds me of my grandma’s kindness and generosity, so it really hit home for me there. Also, I find it unthinkable that August could do such a cruel thing to Rosie as putting flicking his cigarette ashes into her mouth. It is disgusting and just proves how horrible and untrustworthy he is! I mean one second he is happy and laughing and the next, he’s being cruel to animals and Marlena. Did you ever find his multiple personalities really frightening? As a reader, the suspense of just what action August is going to have next really adds to the novel. I was also wondering how you felt when Marlena told you to leave the circus? Was it because she didn’t want you getting hurt or that she didn’t want to deal with August abusing her for your continual presence? I am so happy for you and Marlena to have a child together! You two get along great and I’m sure you will raise him with the warmth and love you shower on each other. Were you at all scared what August would think when he found out about you fathering Marlena’s child and not him? I can hardly imagine the emotions running through your head when you heard August was going after Marlena, because your life is in jeopardy as well as hers. I hope that everything turns out for the best in the next few chapters!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Wow, I have read another amazing section of the novel! (I had to force myself to put it down so I could save something to read for next week’s blog.) Once again, your life is filled with many trying times. Yet through your later years, Rosemary is a constant friend and supportive for you. This is an important figure to have in anyone’s life and just goes to show everyone the different ways a person can lend a hand when you need a boost up. She seems like such a sweet lady and reminds me of my grandma’s kindness and generosity, so it really hit home for me there. Also, I find it unthinkable that August could do such a cruel thing to Rosie as putting flicking his cigarette ashes into her mouth. It is disgusting and just proves how horrible and untrustworthy he is! I mean one second he is happy and laughing and the next, he’s being cruel to animals and Marlena. Did you ever find his multiple personalities really frightening? As a reader, the suspense of just what action August is going to have next really adds to the novel. I was also wondering how you felt when Marlena told you to leave the circus? Was it because she didn’t want you getting hurt or that she didn’t want to deal with August abusing her for your continual presence? I am so happy for you and Marlena to have a child together! You two get along great and I’m sure you will raise him with the warmth and love you shower on each other. Were you at all scared what August would think when he found out about you fathering Marlena’s child and not him? I can hardly imagine the emotions running through your head when you heard August was going after Marlena, because your life is in jeopardy as well as hers. I hope that everything turns out for the best in the next few chapters!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Water for Elephants, Week 6, Post A
VOCAB
Querulous (256)- full of complaints
Contrition (261)- remorse
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“His face is hard, his eyes glinting. His expression suddenly softens. He smiles warmly.(266). This is an example of irony because Uncle Al suddenly has a mood swing and becomes happy, just like August randomly lashes out against Marlena and then becomes happy again.
“...as though battered rotten tomatoes walk through his door every day” (268). This is an example of personification because the author characterizes the mean people as rotten tomatoes and gives the human characteristic of walking to the tomatoes.
“Behind us, a wall of badgers. In front of us, a dozen alligators” (281). This is symbolism for the terrible characters against Jacob, including August and Uncle Al.
QUOTE
“ ‘He hit her,’ I repeat. ‘Yes, I know, very upsetting, that. But he’s her husband, right?’ ” (266). This quote exemplifies the bias some of the characters possess against women in this novel. There is only one woman in the novel, Marlena, and she is constantly surrounded, pressured, and tempted by the men. Uncle Al knows that August hits Marlena, yet he thinks it is an acceptable action because August is Marlena’s husband and he can control her.
THEME
A theme of this novel is to help others in their times of need. Jacob shelters Camel by hiding him behind trunks in the car. Jacob also cares for and fights for Marlena’s dignity when August hits her.
Querulous (256)- full of complaints
Contrition (261)- remorse
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“His face is hard, his eyes glinting. His expression suddenly softens. He smiles warmly.(266). This is an example of irony because Uncle Al suddenly has a mood swing and becomes happy, just like August randomly lashes out against Marlena and then becomes happy again.
“...as though battered rotten tomatoes walk through his door every day” (268). This is an example of personification because the author characterizes the mean people as rotten tomatoes and gives the human characteristic of walking to the tomatoes.
“Behind us, a wall of badgers. In front of us, a dozen alligators” (281). This is symbolism for the terrible characters against Jacob, including August and Uncle Al.
QUOTE
“ ‘He hit her,’ I repeat. ‘Yes, I know, very upsetting, that. But he’s her husband, right?’ ” (266). This quote exemplifies the bias some of the characters possess against women in this novel. There is only one woman in the novel, Marlena, and she is constantly surrounded, pressured, and tempted by the men. Uncle Al knows that August hits Marlena, yet he thinks it is an acceptable action because August is Marlena’s husband and he can control her.
THEME
A theme of this novel is to help others in their times of need. Jacob shelters Camel by hiding him behind trunks in the car. Jacob also cares for and fights for Marlena’s dignity when August hits her.
Monday, March 10, 2008
Water for Elephants, Week 5, Post B
Dear Mr. Jacob Jankowski,
The novel about your life is so engaging, I didn’t know a novel about a circus could be so interesting! Well, once again you have been faced with difficult hardships you must learn to deal with and overcome. The challenge of having Camel ride in your car while trying to keep him hidden and comfortable is an incredible feat you dared to take on. Honestly, I would have been too afraid of being caught with such an ill man, but I’m glad you stuck to your friendship with Camel. I also enjoy seeing the relationship between you and Walter develop, it appears as a friendship now instead of resentfully having to sleep in the same room. At first I was unsure what to think of Uncle Al, but now my mind has been well set on what a horrible man he is. I cannot believe that he bribed the circus employees just to appear mournful while being in Lucinda’s procession, so he could rally people to come see the show. That, to me, is a prime example of a con man who is willing to use any bad situation, such as a death, to his advantage. Also, August’s mistreatment of Rosie irritated me because no animal should have to endure the torture August inflicted upon her. And Rosie is such a smart elephant, how could he be so cruel? Honestly, the things people do for revenge and money are disgusting. Onto a happier topic, I was wondering why you refer to your visitors as “my people” instead of their actual family relation to each other? This makes you seem distanced and secluded from family events. I’m looking forward to see how your relationship with Marlena turns out!
Sincerely,
Rachel
The novel about your life is so engaging, I didn’t know a novel about a circus could be so interesting! Well, once again you have been faced with difficult hardships you must learn to deal with and overcome. The challenge of having Camel ride in your car while trying to keep him hidden and comfortable is an incredible feat you dared to take on. Honestly, I would have been too afraid of being caught with such an ill man, but I’m glad you stuck to your friendship with Camel. I also enjoy seeing the relationship between you and Walter develop, it appears as a friendship now instead of resentfully having to sleep in the same room. At first I was unsure what to think of Uncle Al, but now my mind has been well set on what a horrible man he is. I cannot believe that he bribed the circus employees just to appear mournful while being in Lucinda’s procession, so he could rally people to come see the show. That, to me, is a prime example of a con man who is willing to use any bad situation, such as a death, to his advantage. Also, August’s mistreatment of Rosie irritated me because no animal should have to endure the torture August inflicted upon her. And Rosie is such a smart elephant, how could he be so cruel? Honestly, the things people do for revenge and money are disgusting. Onto a happier topic, I was wondering why you refer to your visitors as “my people” instead of their actual family relation to each other? This makes you seem distanced and secluded from family events. I’m looking forward to see how your relationship with Marlena turns out!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Water for Elephants, Week 5, Post A
VOCAB
Vehemently (209)- passionately, forcefully
Gregarious (221)- friendly
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“Marlena sashays to the center ring and they follow, high-kicking, prancing clouds of black and white” (201). This is an example of figurative language because the horses appearance appeals to the sense of sight and the corresponding loud noises of the horses entering appeals to the sense of sound.
“The roustabouts, once roused, run around like headless chickens” (205). This is a simile because it uses the word “like” to compare the roustabouts frantically running around preparing for the circus to headless chickens.
“She holds it by its edges, giving it a little shake so that it sparkles, throwing a thousand points of light” (233). This is personification because the author is giving the human characteristic of throwing to an inhuman object, the shining costume.
QUOTE
“It’s Walter who insists he take the cot, and in turn I insist that Walter take the bedroll. And so I am back to sleeping on the horse blanket in the corner” (197). It is evident that Jacob and Walter’s relationship is developing into a friendship in the way they insist the other one should have the better bed.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to fight and stand up for what one wants in life, otherwise one might not get it. Jacob is extremely upset at the way August treats Marlena and engages him in a fight (though this is probably not the best way to sort out one’s problems).
Vehemently (209)- passionately, forcefully
Gregarious (221)- friendly
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“Marlena sashays to the center ring and they follow, high-kicking, prancing clouds of black and white” (201). This is an example of figurative language because the horses appearance appeals to the sense of sight and the corresponding loud noises of the horses entering appeals to the sense of sound.
“The roustabouts, once roused, run around like headless chickens” (205). This is a simile because it uses the word “like” to compare the roustabouts frantically running around preparing for the circus to headless chickens.
“She holds it by its edges, giving it a little shake so that it sparkles, throwing a thousand points of light” (233). This is personification because the author is giving the human characteristic of throwing to an inhuman object, the shining costume.
QUOTE
“It’s Walter who insists he take the cot, and in turn I insist that Walter take the bedroll. And so I am back to sleeping on the horse blanket in the corner” (197). It is evident that Jacob and Walter’s relationship is developing into a friendship in the way they insist the other one should have the better bed.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to fight and stand up for what one wants in life, otherwise one might not get it. Jacob is extremely upset at the way August treats Marlena and engages him in a fight (though this is probably not the best way to sort out one’s problems).
Tuesday, March 4, 2008
Water for Elephants, Week 4, Post B
Dear Mr. Jacob Jankowski,
I am continually amazed at the experiences you faced while being a worker in the circus. You are always in an interesting situation which keeps me intrigued in your story! The part where you and Marlena were caught in the middle of a raid were particularly interesting to me. I would have been scared stiff if I was in this situation and would not have been thinking clearly. However, you seemed to be quite cool headed as you and Marlena raced out which amazed me. Were you trying to hide your true emotions so you wouldn’t let Marlena know how frightened you were of being caught? I’m also confused as to why Walter suddenly opened up to you so quickly after being hostile for so long, I assume it had to do with you curing Queenie. In addition, I thought it was very brave and noble to you to want to sit at Walter’s table, when all of the other workers were segregated in their respective areas. Truly, you were just a step ahead of your time because you wanted to mix with people of another social stature, which I commend you for. It is not acceptable to be so foreboding to people of another class, after all, we are all people who live and breathe together. Anyways, August seems like a daunting character who always wants to put other people down, yet I am again amazed at the way you are able to keep your composure around him and not lash out. I also feel a strong connection to you for your respect for and love of animals. I have loved animals since I was younger and support your quote that, “This animals isn’t stupid” (163), when you speak of Rosie. I agree that animals should not be treated poorly just because they can’t speak our language. I can’t wait to continue reading about your life, it’s a true page turner!
Sincerely,
Rachel
I am continually amazed at the experiences you faced while being a worker in the circus. You are always in an interesting situation which keeps me intrigued in your story! The part where you and Marlena were caught in the middle of a raid were particularly interesting to me. I would have been scared stiff if I was in this situation and would not have been thinking clearly. However, you seemed to be quite cool headed as you and Marlena raced out which amazed me. Were you trying to hide your true emotions so you wouldn’t let Marlena know how frightened you were of being caught? I’m also confused as to why Walter suddenly opened up to you so quickly after being hostile for so long, I assume it had to do with you curing Queenie. In addition, I thought it was very brave and noble to you to want to sit at Walter’s table, when all of the other workers were segregated in their respective areas. Truly, you were just a step ahead of your time because you wanted to mix with people of another social stature, which I commend you for. It is not acceptable to be so foreboding to people of another class, after all, we are all people who live and breathe together. Anyways, August seems like a daunting character who always wants to put other people down, yet I am again amazed at the way you are able to keep your composure around him and not lash out. I also feel a strong connection to you for your respect for and love of animals. I have loved animals since I was younger and support your quote that, “This animals isn’t stupid” (163), when you speak of Rosie. I agree that animals should not be treated poorly just because they can’t speak our language. I can’t wait to continue reading about your life, it’s a true page turner!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Water for Elephants, Week 4, Post A
VOCAB
Alexander (151)- a cocktail made with crème de cacao, gin or brandy and cream
Dervish (153)- energetic dancing or chanting by a member of Muslim society
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“My head is crammed with visions, all jumbled up like a ball of string” (143). This is a simile because it compares the confusing visions in Jacob’s head to a messy ball of string, using the word “like”.
“Her eyes are huge and dark, and she has the velvet-soft lips of a horse” (147). This is imagery because it appeals to the sense of sight, in describing the giraffe’s eyes, and the sense of touch, in describing the soft lips of the giraffe.
“And so I leave, although every bone in my body screams against it” (195). This is an example of personification because the author gives Jacob’s bone the human quality of being able to scream.
QUOTE
“The pattern is undeniable. There is no question that I am the only thing standing between these animals and the business practices of August and Uncle Al, and what my father would do-what my father would want me to do-is look after them, and I am filled with that absolute and unwavering conviction” (146). Jacob’s connection with animals allows him to also feel a bond with his deceased father. He feels he must intervene in August and Uncle Al’s ways to please the animals, and perhaps more importantly, his father.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to never forget one’s past. Jacob could easily have removed himself from the entire world once his parents died, but he chose not to. Instead, Jacob felt a close bond to his father through working with the circus animals and he is able to reflect and remember his parents, especially his father, during this time.
Alexander (151)- a cocktail made with crème de cacao, gin or brandy and cream
Dervish (153)- energetic dancing or chanting by a member of Muslim society
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“My head is crammed with visions, all jumbled up like a ball of string” (143). This is a simile because it compares the confusing visions in Jacob’s head to a messy ball of string, using the word “like”.
“Her eyes are huge and dark, and she has the velvet-soft lips of a horse” (147). This is imagery because it appeals to the sense of sight, in describing the giraffe’s eyes, and the sense of touch, in describing the soft lips of the giraffe.
“And so I leave, although every bone in my body screams against it” (195). This is an example of personification because the author gives Jacob’s bone the human quality of being able to scream.
QUOTE
“The pattern is undeniable. There is no question that I am the only thing standing between these animals and the business practices of August and Uncle Al, and what my father would do-what my father would want me to do-is look after them, and I am filled with that absolute and unwavering conviction” (146). Jacob’s connection with animals allows him to also feel a bond with his deceased father. He feels he must intervene in August and Uncle Al’s ways to please the animals, and perhaps more importantly, his father.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to never forget one’s past. Jacob could easily have removed himself from the entire world once his parents died, but he chose not to. Instead, Jacob felt a close bond to his father through working with the circus animals and he is able to reflect and remember his parents, especially his father, during this time.
Correction to Post 3A
My third example of figurative language from 3A is an example of imagery (not figurative language as I originally had it)!
Tuesday, February 26, 2008
Water for Elephants, Week 3, Post B
Dear Mr. Jacob Jankowski,
I absolutely love the novel Water for Elephants about your life! At first I was skeptical about the book, because the life of a circus hand just didn’t sound that appealing to me. But I was definitely wrong and I found that out in the first few pages. I actually am really enjoying this novel and can hardly wait to finish each chapter. First off, I think it’s really brave of you that you were able to uproot yourself from your home and just start a completely new life. I understand that you’re in your early twenties and all, but aren’t you ever homesick for your family and friends? I know I would be if I were in that situation. What did you think about Rosie when you first met her? Were you scared to work with such a beastly animal or were you thrilled by the challenge of it? I think it’s neat how you have a really strong connection with animals and think of them as people, like when you think Rosie smiles at you and Marlena. I love animals and also agree that they share feelings and are able to emote their emotions, just like humans. I found a really inspirational quote you thought of in your novel, “At the end of a desperate day is peace” (131). I totally agree with this statement and find it quite uplifting to know that even if the time’s become difficult, anyone should still be content with what he has. It lets the reader know your viewpoint on the whole life picture and that you in particular are able to persevere through difficult situations. I am still confused as to why Pete slit the throats of the horses and watched them die. I found that scene extremely gruesome and disturbing. Even though that terrible event occurred, I am looking forward to reading more of your novel!
Sincerely,
Rachel
I absolutely love the novel Water for Elephants about your life! At first I was skeptical about the book, because the life of a circus hand just didn’t sound that appealing to me. But I was definitely wrong and I found that out in the first few pages. I actually am really enjoying this novel and can hardly wait to finish each chapter. First off, I think it’s really brave of you that you were able to uproot yourself from your home and just start a completely new life. I understand that you’re in your early twenties and all, but aren’t you ever homesick for your family and friends? I know I would be if I were in that situation. What did you think about Rosie when you first met her? Were you scared to work with such a beastly animal or were you thrilled by the challenge of it? I think it’s neat how you have a really strong connection with animals and think of them as people, like when you think Rosie smiles at you and Marlena. I love animals and also agree that they share feelings and are able to emote their emotions, just like humans. I found a really inspirational quote you thought of in your novel, “At the end of a desperate day is peace” (131). I totally agree with this statement and find it quite uplifting to know that even if the time’s become difficult, anyone should still be content with what he has. It lets the reader know your viewpoint on the whole life picture and that you in particular are able to persevere through difficult situations. I am still confused as to why Pete slit the throats of the horses and watched them die. I found that scene extremely gruesome and disturbing. Even though that terrible event occurred, I am looking forward to reading more of your novel!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Water for Elephants, Week 3, Post A
VOCAB
Pablum (105)- a brand of soft, bland cereal for infants
Bowdlerizing (109)- To remove material that is considered offensive or objectionable
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“I remember leaving my house for the last time, bundled up like a cat on the way to the vet” (109). This is an example of a simile because it compares how tightly and securely packed Jacob was when he moved to a cat traveling to the vet’s office. This clearly states how tightly packed Jacob was, complete with everything he owned.
“They talk and they talk and they talk, about how fine/foul/fair the weather is...”(110). This is an example of an alliteration because of the repetition of the letter “f”. The repetition also symbolizes how monotonous Jacob’s visits with his family are.
“Instead, I find an Appalachian apple doll, withered and spotty, with dewlaps and bags and long floppy ears” (111). This is figurative language because the author is detailing exactly what Jacob saw in the mirror, himself as an old man. The detail in this sentence really conveys just how old and weathered Jacob saw himself.
QUOTE
“When did I stop being me?” (111). This quote is really significant because it is a turning point when Jacob realizes just how old he has become. He has complained about getting help from his family members and the nursing staff at his home, but at this point he suddenly comprehends that he actually needs the help in some situations, though he will still object to it.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to live life to the fullest capacity you are able to because in the blink of an eye you won’t be as physically able as you once were. Jacob is a perfect example of this, when he looks in the mirror and suddenly realizes he doesn’t know when the time flew by, it just happened.
Pablum (105)- a brand of soft, bland cereal for infants
Bowdlerizing (109)- To remove material that is considered offensive or objectionable
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“I remember leaving my house for the last time, bundled up like a cat on the way to the vet” (109). This is an example of a simile because it compares how tightly and securely packed Jacob was when he moved to a cat traveling to the vet’s office. This clearly states how tightly packed Jacob was, complete with everything he owned.
“They talk and they talk and they talk, about how fine/foul/fair the weather is...”(110). This is an example of an alliteration because of the repetition of the letter “f”. The repetition also symbolizes how monotonous Jacob’s visits with his family are.
“Instead, I find an Appalachian apple doll, withered and spotty, with dewlaps and bags and long floppy ears” (111). This is figurative language because the author is detailing exactly what Jacob saw in the mirror, himself as an old man. The detail in this sentence really conveys just how old and weathered Jacob saw himself.
QUOTE
“When did I stop being me?” (111). This quote is really significant because it is a turning point when Jacob realizes just how old he has become. He has complained about getting help from his family members and the nursing staff at his home, but at this point he suddenly comprehends that he actually needs the help in some situations, though he will still object to it.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to live life to the fullest capacity you are able to because in the blink of an eye you won’t be as physically able as you once were. Jacob is a perfect example of this, when he looks in the mirror and suddenly realizes he doesn’t know when the time flew by, it just happened.
Tuesday, February 19, 2008
Water for Elephants, Week 2, Post B
Dear Ms. Sara Gruen,
I am currently reading your novel “Water for Elephants” and I absolutely love it! The careful details you put into each character make each one extremely unique. I like how you let the reader imagine how the character looks physically, except for a few features you mention, but truly allow the character to emerge in the actions and conversations it has. My favorite character is Jacob because his life is really detailed throughout the novel. It’s also really interesting the flashbacks Jacob has because each chapter alternates between his ninety-year-old self and his twenty-year-old self. It’s also really true that I have pity for him considering he lost both of his parents at such a crucial time in his young life (I have to say, you know just how to pull the readers’ heart strings!) Was Jacob’s character inspired by someone in your life? Did you ever go through any of Jacob’s experiences? How did you decide to write about a traveling circus? Were circuses a special occasion for you as a young child, or did your family members take part in a circus somehow? So far, my favorite part of the novel was when Jacob and Kinko become roommates on the train because the tension between the two of them was so apparent, just with their actions. I really enjoyed how you described how both Jacob and Kinko reacted during that part because you didn’t just say “Jacob was mad” or “Kinko threw his comic book,” the details you put in were fantastic. I absolutely cannot wait to read more of this novel, it really keeps me intrigued!
Sincerely,
Rachel
I am currently reading your novel “Water for Elephants” and I absolutely love it! The careful details you put into each character make each one extremely unique. I like how you let the reader imagine how the character looks physically, except for a few features you mention, but truly allow the character to emerge in the actions and conversations it has. My favorite character is Jacob because his life is really detailed throughout the novel. It’s also really interesting the flashbacks Jacob has because each chapter alternates between his ninety-year-old self and his twenty-year-old self. It’s also really true that I have pity for him considering he lost both of his parents at such a crucial time in his young life (I have to say, you know just how to pull the readers’ heart strings!) Was Jacob’s character inspired by someone in your life? Did you ever go through any of Jacob’s experiences? How did you decide to write about a traveling circus? Were circuses a special occasion for you as a young child, or did your family members take part in a circus somehow? So far, my favorite part of the novel was when Jacob and Kinko become roommates on the train because the tension between the two of them was so apparent, just with their actions. I really enjoyed how you described how both Jacob and Kinko reacted during that part because you didn’t just say “Jacob was mad” or “Kinko threw his comic book,” the details you put in were fantastic. I absolutely cannot wait to read more of this novel, it really keeps me intrigued!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Water for Elephants, Week 2, Post A
VOCAB
Jodhpurs (52)- riding breeches that are tight from the knees to the ankles
Snifter (56)- a pear-shaped glass that intensifies the aroma of liqueur
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“The big top still stands, glowing like a ghostly coliseum” (49). This is a metaphor because it compares two unlike things, the glowing big top to a ghostly coliseum, using the word “like”.
“Happy as a clam, that’s me” (53). This is also an example of a metaphor because it compares Camel’s happiness to a clam, using the word “like”. It is evident that Camel is very content because this phrase is commonly used to express someone’s happiness.
“A smirk plays around the edges of his lips” (58). This is an example of personification because it gives the human characteristic of playing to the non-human smirk.
QUOTE
“He’s...mercurial. He’s capable of being the most charming man on earth. Like tonight” (95). Marlena is explaining to Jacob the multiple personalities that August shows. This is important because Jacob begins to understand the reason why August made a joke of Jacob almost getting his arm bitten off by a tiger earlier that day.
THEME
A developing theme in this book is to find a good outcome in a dark situation. Jacob was left alone in the world when his parents died in an accident when he was college, so he decides to join the circus. In the circus, he starts as a low placed cleaning man and gradually works his way up to become the veterinarian for the circus, which he went to school for.
Jodhpurs (52)- riding breeches that are tight from the knees to the ankles
Snifter (56)- a pear-shaped glass that intensifies the aroma of liqueur
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“The big top still stands, glowing like a ghostly coliseum” (49). This is a metaphor because it compares two unlike things, the glowing big top to a ghostly coliseum, using the word “like”.
“Happy as a clam, that’s me” (53). This is also an example of a metaphor because it compares Camel’s happiness to a clam, using the word “like”. It is evident that Camel is very content because this phrase is commonly used to express someone’s happiness.
“A smirk plays around the edges of his lips” (58). This is an example of personification because it gives the human characteristic of playing to the non-human smirk.
QUOTE
“He’s...mercurial. He’s capable of being the most charming man on earth. Like tonight” (95). Marlena is explaining to Jacob the multiple personalities that August shows. This is important because Jacob begins to understand the reason why August made a joke of Jacob almost getting his arm bitten off by a tiger earlier that day.
THEME
A developing theme in this book is to find a good outcome in a dark situation. Jacob was left alone in the world when his parents died in an accident when he was college, so he decides to join the circus. In the circus, he starts as a low placed cleaning man and gradually works his way up to become the veterinarian for the circus, which he went to school for.
Monday, February 11, 2008
Water for Elephants, Week 1, Post B
Dear Mr. Jacob Jankowski,
I have just read the first fifty pages of Water for Elephants and I am truly enjoying reading about your life story. I am so sorry about all of the losses and grief you have had to endure in your life. First of all, living through the Great Depression must have been an experience that truly tested people’s hearts. Did it ever register in your mind what was happening because you were quite young at the time? How was your family and school life changed during the depression? It would be really interesting to know how your family was affected by it, but I’m sure that would take an entirely new novel to describe. Secondly, the death of your parents must have turned your world upside down. I send my greatest sympathies to you because that should be an experience no teenager has to live through. Will you ever be able to forgive Mr. McPherson for the death of your parents? If I was in your situation, it would be extremely hard for me to forgive a person for the unintentional death of my parents because my family is very close and I also hold grudges for a long time. I continue to be amazed at how you were able to move on with your life with such composure, though I’m sure they are never far out of your mind. Well, I will move on to some happier thoughts now! The Benzini Brothers Circus sounds like an exciting show to be involved in. I think it would be an amazing experience to be a part of the circus and have contact with so many unique people, whether it’s the trainers, performers, crew, or even the animals. I wish you the best of luck in the circus business, or whatever dream you wish to pursue!
Sincerely,
Rachel
I have just read the first fifty pages of Water for Elephants and I am truly enjoying reading about your life story. I am so sorry about all of the losses and grief you have had to endure in your life. First of all, living through the Great Depression must have been an experience that truly tested people’s hearts. Did it ever register in your mind what was happening because you were quite young at the time? How was your family and school life changed during the depression? It would be really interesting to know how your family was affected by it, but I’m sure that would take an entirely new novel to describe. Secondly, the death of your parents must have turned your world upside down. I send my greatest sympathies to you because that should be an experience no teenager has to live through. Will you ever be able to forgive Mr. McPherson for the death of your parents? If I was in your situation, it would be extremely hard for me to forgive a person for the unintentional death of my parents because my family is very close and I also hold grudges for a long time. I continue to be amazed at how you were able to move on with your life with such composure, though I’m sure they are never far out of your mind. Well, I will move on to some happier thoughts now! The Benzini Brothers Circus sounds like an exciting show to be involved in. I think it would be an amazing experience to be a part of the circus and have contact with so many unique people, whether it’s the trainers, performers, crew, or even the animals. I wish you the best of luck in the circus business, or whatever dream you wish to pursue!
Sincerely,
Rachel
Water for Elephants, Week 1, Post A
VOCAB
Rubes (3)- slang for an unsophisticated country person
Languidly (15)- lacking spirit
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“That moment, the music screeched to a halt. There was an ungodly collision of brass, reed, and percussion-trombones and piccolos skidded into cacophony, a tuba farted, and the hallow clang of a cymbal wavered out of the big top, over our heads and into oblivion” (2). This is an example of imagery because the detailed description of the horrible sounds appeals to the sense of hearing. The great detail in this sentence allows the author to convey to the reader the exact sounds she wants them to imagine.
“Her sequins flashed like liquid diamonds” (4). This is an example of a simile, because it compares two things, the sequins to liquid diamonds. The simile accurately describes just how the sequins flashed because they were so gleaming and shiny like diamonds.
“Snatches of sky peek through leaves” (22). Because the sky is given the human characteristic of peeking, or being able to see, through the leaves this is an example of personification.
QUOTE
“Age is a terrible thief. Just when you’re getting the hang of life, it knocks your legs out form under you and stoops your back...being the survivor stinks” (12). Jacob wants to go back to his younger days when he was physically able to do things and his wife was still living. Ever since his wife died, Jacob has thought deeply about his life and sometimes wishes he would have died too, so that he wouldn’t have to watch himself and everyone around him grow old and frail.
THEME
An emerging theme in this novel is perseverance. Jacob faces many challenges throughout his life, including living during the Great Depression, losing his parents while he is in college, and losing his wife of 61 years. Yet through all of these difficult times, Jacob is able to find the motivation to keep living and he perseveres.
Rubes (3)- slang for an unsophisticated country person
Languidly (15)- lacking spirit
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“That moment, the music screeched to a halt. There was an ungodly collision of brass, reed, and percussion-trombones and piccolos skidded into cacophony, a tuba farted, and the hallow clang of a cymbal wavered out of the big top, over our heads and into oblivion” (2). This is an example of imagery because the detailed description of the horrible sounds appeals to the sense of hearing. The great detail in this sentence allows the author to convey to the reader the exact sounds she wants them to imagine.
“Her sequins flashed like liquid diamonds” (4). This is an example of a simile, because it compares two things, the sequins to liquid diamonds. The simile accurately describes just how the sequins flashed because they were so gleaming and shiny like diamonds.
“Snatches of sky peek through leaves” (22). Because the sky is given the human characteristic of peeking, or being able to see, through the leaves this is an example of personification.
QUOTE
“Age is a terrible thief. Just when you’re getting the hang of life, it knocks your legs out form under you and stoops your back...being the survivor stinks” (12). Jacob wants to go back to his younger days when he was physically able to do things and his wife was still living. Ever since his wife died, Jacob has thought deeply about his life and sometimes wishes he would have died too, so that he wouldn’t have to watch himself and everyone around him grow old and frail.
THEME
An emerging theme in this novel is perseverance. Jacob faces many challenges throughout his life, including living during the Great Depression, losing his parents while he is in college, and losing his wife of 61 years. Yet through all of these difficult times, Jacob is able to find the motivation to keep living and he perseveres.
Sunday, February 3, 2008
Athena, "You've Got a Friend"
Athena is a goddess who is always willing to help others get out of a tough situation. I think she exemplifies a strong willed woman because of her ability to be there for other people when they need her most. I like that Athena is a strong goddess who tests her own strength by helping others and that she disguises herself when she does so.
In two situations, she has demonstrated her ability to assist others in difficult situations. During book two, she disguises herself as a friend of Odysseus and gives Telemachus hope and courage that he can succeed on his journey to find his father, “Athena came to his prayer from close at hand, for all the world with Mentor’s build and voice and she urged him on with willing words” (300-302). Later, in book five, she saves Odysseus from the storm that Poseidon has created against him, “Zeus’s daughter Athena countered him at once. The rest of the winds she stopped right in their tracks, commanding them all to hush now, go to sleep” (421-423).
James Taylor’s song “You’ve Got a Friend” is a moving piece that represents the support a person needs during tough times. The lyrics fully embrace Athena’s willingness to encourage others to do their best when times turn difficult. In particular, these lyrics illustrate the encouragement Athena always gives to others and her ability to be there whenever they need her, because she is a goddess: “When you’re down and troubled /And you need a helping hand / And nothing, whoa nothing is going right. / Close your eyes and think of me / And soon I will be there / To brighten up even your darkest nights. / You just call out my name, / And you know wherever I am / Ill come running, oh yeah baby / To see you again.” Athena is more than willing to lend a hand, whether it’s giving Telemachus hope, or saving Odysseus from the shipwreck, she’s always there and ready to help.
In two situations, she has demonstrated her ability to assist others in difficult situations. During book two, she disguises herself as a friend of Odysseus and gives Telemachus hope and courage that he can succeed on his journey to find his father, “Athena came to his prayer from close at hand, for all the world with Mentor’s build and voice and she urged him on with willing words” (300-302). Later, in book five, she saves Odysseus from the storm that Poseidon has created against him, “Zeus’s daughter Athena countered him at once. The rest of the winds she stopped right in their tracks, commanding them all to hush now, go to sleep” (421-423).
James Taylor’s song “You’ve Got a Friend” is a moving piece that represents the support a person needs during tough times. The lyrics fully embrace Athena’s willingness to encourage others to do their best when times turn difficult. In particular, these lyrics illustrate the encouragement Athena always gives to others and her ability to be there whenever they need her, because she is a goddess: “When you’re down and troubled /And you need a helping hand / And nothing, whoa nothing is going right. / Close your eyes and think of me / And soon I will be there / To brighten up even your darkest nights. / You just call out my name, / And you know wherever I am / Ill come running, oh yeah baby / To see you again.” Athena is more than willing to lend a hand, whether it’s giving Telemachus hope, or saving Odysseus from the shipwreck, she’s always there and ready to help.
Saturday, January 5, 2008
House Lights, Week 7, Post B
Dear Miss Beatrice Fisher-Hart,
I was really intrigued reading the last section of the novel of your life and I want to know how your life was after it! It was confusing to me why you wouldn’t want your best friend Maeve to attend your mother’s funeral when she brought you to the airport. Did you figure it would be too painful for her to attend? Or was it because you wanted to appear strong and not rely on the support of your dear friend? Anyways, I found this quote really profound, “On the planet Fisher-Hart the truth did not exist, the atmosphere being too thin to support it” (257). It so accurately describes the main problem within your family, that of telling the truth and also exemplifies how myopic your family was because you had your own “planet”. Do you believe that your parents chose not to tell the truth in order to protect your other family members, or were they truly incapable of doing so? Though you have made mistakes in blaming others for certain events, I am glad you have realized these mistakes and tried to reconnect with those it hurt. For example, you were mad at your father for the accusations, but you never talked to him about them. Also, you were mad at Hale for being old and becoming sick, but it’s the risk you take when you marry an older man. At least you realized these mistakes before the relationships you had with these men were completely severed. Do you believe your relationship with your father was like that of the relationship between your mother and grandmother? Though your relationship with your father has been difficult and at some times nonexistent for the past 20 years, I am thrilled that you have reconciled with him and begun the road to acceptance.
Sincerely,
Rachel
I was really intrigued reading the last section of the novel of your life and I want to know how your life was after it! It was confusing to me why you wouldn’t want your best friend Maeve to attend your mother’s funeral when she brought you to the airport. Did you figure it would be too painful for her to attend? Or was it because you wanted to appear strong and not rely on the support of your dear friend? Anyways, I found this quote really profound, “On the planet Fisher-Hart the truth did not exist, the atmosphere being too thin to support it” (257). It so accurately describes the main problem within your family, that of telling the truth and also exemplifies how myopic your family was because you had your own “planet”. Do you believe that your parents chose not to tell the truth in order to protect your other family members, or were they truly incapable of doing so? Though you have made mistakes in blaming others for certain events, I am glad you have realized these mistakes and tried to reconnect with those it hurt. For example, you were mad at your father for the accusations, but you never talked to him about them. Also, you were mad at Hale for being old and becoming sick, but it’s the risk you take when you marry an older man. At least you realized these mistakes before the relationships you had with these men were completely severed. Do you believe your relationship with your father was like that of the relationship between your mother and grandmother? Though your relationship with your father has been difficult and at some times nonexistent for the past 20 years, I am thrilled that you have reconciled with him and begun the road to acceptance.
Sincerely,
Rachel
House Lights, Week 7, Post A
VOCAB
Locution (257)- a style of speech
Harangues (283)- to deliver a long, arrogant speech to
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“It is snow-globe snow, tiny and whirling in slow motion, more glitter than flake” (254). This is imagery because it describes the particular kind of snow and how it was falling. This detail makes it easy to imagine the exact type of snow the author wanted to convey to the reader in a simple and effective way.
“…the minute, cloying sound of icicles dripping, like a cat lapping milk” (259). This is a simile, because it compares two unlike things, the sound of dripping icicles to a cat drinking milk, using the word “like”.
“I am left with it now, that model, like an inheritance, and it strikes me, as I stare at my reflection in her bathroom mirror, that in a way that is everything” (290). The act of Beatrice staring into her deceased mother’s mirror is a symbol for Beatrice realizing how alike she is to her mother and the unique relationship they shared.
QUOTE
“…the overriding smallness of Maine, which evokes for me the smallness of my parents’ lives, which evokes for me the smallness of my own heart” (261-2). Beatrice begins to realize just how insignificant her parents’ lives are and how her own heart lacks the ability to truly love people. She understands that her parents had the potential to positively affect more lives but chose not to. Also, the realization that her own heart is capable of loving but it is rather difficult to do so because of her childhood relationships.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to love those around you and appreciate the unique characteristics of everyone. This kind of accepting love will allow a person to have closer relationships with the people they love, because they aren’t focused on the negative traits.
Locution (257)- a style of speech
Harangues (283)- to deliver a long, arrogant speech to
FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE
“It is snow-globe snow, tiny and whirling in slow motion, more glitter than flake” (254). This is imagery because it describes the particular kind of snow and how it was falling. This detail makes it easy to imagine the exact type of snow the author wanted to convey to the reader in a simple and effective way.
“…the minute, cloying sound of icicles dripping, like a cat lapping milk” (259). This is a simile, because it compares two unlike things, the sound of dripping icicles to a cat drinking milk, using the word “like”.
“I am left with it now, that model, like an inheritance, and it strikes me, as I stare at my reflection in her bathroom mirror, that in a way that is everything” (290). The act of Beatrice staring into her deceased mother’s mirror is a symbol for Beatrice realizing how alike she is to her mother and the unique relationship they shared.
QUOTE
“…the overriding smallness of Maine, which evokes for me the smallness of my parents’ lives, which evokes for me the smallness of my own heart” (261-2). Beatrice begins to realize just how insignificant her parents’ lives are and how her own heart lacks the ability to truly love people. She understands that her parents had the potential to positively affect more lives but chose not to. Also, the realization that her own heart is capable of loving but it is rather difficult to do so because of her childhood relationships.
THEME
A theme in this novel is to love those around you and appreciate the unique characteristics of everyone. This kind of accepting love will allow a person to have closer relationships with the people they love, because they aren’t focused on the negative traits.
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